Open Poetry #37 |
Routine |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"To share your pain or soothe a fevered brow if only the distance would allow" Moving slowly myself. Routine, the highlight of my day. Springing forth with somewhere moments timed unknown, dressed in a touch of your mind. Your blue tinted world becomes me, as I walk in shadows that follow wishing for a better tomorrow... for you, for me. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
for us all, this touched me deeply, how beautifully articulated...and written in a way, that is understanding...allowing..tremendous articulation.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Your blue tinted world becomes me, as I walk in shadows that follow wishing for a better tomorrow... for you, for me." A wonderful write Maureen. Much enjoyed your thoughts. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Here's to better tomorrows for all of us! I love this Maureen Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful heartfelt words. But, I guess that’s just the way you are. Wouldn’t expect any less. JL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Routine, the highlight of my day." ~ May all your tomorrows be better ones! You bring your readers into your world. I always feel your writes. Ea |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
LeeJ, thank you so much...I enjoy reading your deepest thoughts M Nancy, The flu seems to have reached more than myself....here's hoping today is a better day. (love your signature) Interloper, thank you "I"...I am almost over this thing (have to work anyway now and breathe in all those coughing germs in the schools) JL, thank you for your "sweet" response Linda, I am glad you can feel my words, sometimes I am told I open up too much. hope you are doing well M |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Feel better soon Reene... I've been nursing my youngest through it too... sending her back to give it back..! I like that dress -- quite a designer |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Reb...this thing sure holds on...hope your daughter is feeling better... thanks for the compliment M |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed reading this. ~Alli~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Maureen, I know I've told you before, but you write some of the best poetry. Whatever your topic is, it always touches my heart. I hope you're feeling better now from the flu. My lungs have been giving me more trouble lately. Hugs, Ethel |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
At times a touch seems so little At times a touch seems so much Enjoyed Gloom |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
"wishing for a better tomorrow... for you, for me." Oh dear this is beautiful. Made me all tear up. Then again. I did just have a maths class. hugs and xx's farewell the ash-tray girl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you ~Alli~ Ethel, I am glad that what I write has some meaning for you. I actually lead a very plain life besides my "situation" so I can only write what I know. I appreciate your responses...and I hope you are feeling better today. The flu has flown for me... although I am still a bit tired. PG..I agree. Thanks for taking the time to stop by. playing.with.crayons Hmmmm..Math makes you cry it's one of my favorite subjects... thank you M |
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