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miscellanea
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0 posted 2006-03-22 08:05 AM


Bring me alive this morning
as snow warms the ground
sun wakes the sky;
Send joy from my lips.
Bring rays
Warm my back
while light beams  
tenderly drill
for pains escape;
Leave no evil thoughts
to slide across lips.
May old thoughts disappear
As  eyescycles drip to puddles
Then bulbs extend
their stems in velvet grass.
Rise, Myself!
There are blessings in those skies!
Above situation,
sum the skies;
Always rise.

               ~misc'e


[This message has been edited by miscellanea (03-24-2006 12:52 PM).]

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-03-22 08:08 AM


hey girl, good to see you and read this enchanting poem of yours this morning...very very lovely


miscellanea
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2 posted 2006-03-22 08:12 AM


LeeJ.!   It is especially nice to hear from you again.  Thanks for your sweet response-- it has initiated my day.  I hope you have a fine one, too!

hugs,
misc'e

Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-03-22 08:32 AM


Misc'e...

it will all melt soon.
Loved the play on words...

how is the music coming?




curiouse
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4 posted 2006-03-22 08:32 AM


fantastic
miscellanea
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5 posted 2006-03-22 09:05 AM


Sunshine,

   Ah... to melt. We have had only one good snow this year--before it melts, I think need to get out the sleds and put on some homemade chili and hot cocoa!  
  
My family is one that always tried to preserve everything.  I remember once we stashed some icicles in the freezer and kept them for a few years.  Inevitably, when we took them out to examine, they melted.  Such with the preservation!  But...they are simply beautiful to observe for a short time.

Have a wonderful week, Sunshine.  It is so good to hear from you again!!!

As to the music, sometimes it comes, and sometimes it doesn't.  I have attempted to rewrite your song with an intro.  After I spent all the time refiguring, I decided to scratch the idea of an intro and just rewrite it as it was.  Now, to make it legible.  That is the trick!

hugs to you, my friend,
cathy

miscellanea
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6 posted 2006-03-22 09:07 AM


curiouse,

   I am so glad you enjoyed it.  Hope to see you at your post soon.

    misc'e

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2006-03-22 09:08 AM


With an attitude like yours, you will alwarys rise above the mundane and the pain!

You have a beautiful spirit ~ and it is contagious!

Hugs 'n smiles,
EA

Enchantress
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8 posted 2006-03-22 09:21 AM


A most beautiful morning read!
Lifted my spirit for sure!
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

suthern
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9 posted 2006-03-23 04:32 PM


Can you come be my alarm clock? Please??? LOL With thoughts like these, I might be motivated to do more than moan! LOL

Beautiful work!


James_A_Fraser
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10 posted 2006-03-29 11:45 PM


Leave no evil thoughts
to slide across lips.

None? How disappointing!

How about just the lips and the slide then, with no thought happening at all?



~~J

JL
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11 posted 2006-03-30 12:09 PM


WOW!  This is a great write!
And very good advice.

JL

iliana
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12 posted 2006-03-30 12:12 PM


Sweetheart, there are blessings in those skys....this is wonderful.   ....jo
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