Open Poetry #37 |
Early morning motivation: Rise, Myself, Oh Rise! |
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Bring me alive this morning as snow warms the ground sun wakes the sky; Send joy from my lips. Bring rays Warm my back while light beams tenderly drill for pains escape; Leave no evil thoughts to slide across lips. May old thoughts disappear As eyescycles drip to puddles Then bulbs extend their stems in velvet grass. Rise, Myself! There are blessings in those skies! Above situation, sum the skies; Always rise. ~misc'e [This message has been edited by miscellanea (03-24-2006 12:52 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hey girl, good to see you and read this enchanting poem of yours this morning...very very lovely |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
LeeJ.! It is especially nice to hear from you again. Thanks for your sweet response-- it has initiated my day. I hope you have a fine one, too! hugs, misc'e |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Misc'e... it will all melt soon. Loved the play on words... how is the music coming? |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
fantastic |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sunshine, Ah... to melt. We have had only one good snow this year--before it melts, I think need to get out the sleds and put on some homemade chili and hot cocoa! My family is one that always tried to preserve everything. I remember once we stashed some icicles in the freezer and kept them for a few years. Inevitably, when we took them out to examine, they melted. Such with the preservation! But...they are simply beautiful to observe for a short time. Have a wonderful week, Sunshine. It is so good to hear from you again!!! As to the music, sometimes it comes, and sometimes it doesn't. I have attempted to rewrite your song with an intro. After I spent all the time refiguring, I decided to scratch the idea of an intro and just rewrite it as it was. Now, to make it legible. That is the trick! hugs to you, my friend, cathy |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
curiouse, I am so glad you enjoyed it. Hope to see you at your post soon. misc'e |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
With an attitude like yours, you will alwarys rise above the mundane and the pain! You have a beautiful spirit ~ and it is contagious! Hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most beautiful morning read! Lifted my spirit for sure! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Can you come be my alarm clock? Please??? LOL With thoughts like these, I might be motivated to do more than moan! LOL Beautiful work! |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Leave no evil thoughts to slide across lips. None? How disappointing! How about just the lips and the slide then, with no thought happening at all? |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
WOW! This is a great write! And very good advice. JL |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sweetheart, there are blessings in those skys....this is wonderful. ....jo |
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