Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2006-03-21
08:00 AM
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From out the Mist
From out the mist of time she came One evening in a dream of get An Eve of nude with flowing frame Stood in dew drops mornings let
A flower in the purest sense Mature of nectar full of Mel Each breath I breathed became intense And brought my passions up from hell
Let from heaven, stars above An Angel in her presence Symbols dove that turns to love A cauldron full of essence
The tender wile of the blender There was no toll upon this beach Cloaked in graces lovely splendor I could not move beyond her reach
I hovered in this dream of store But could not touch illusions awe
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Seymour Tabin
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2006-03-21
08:55 AM
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Perhaps it is your dreams that are your reality ~ and your waking hours be the illusion.
You rise from the mists of time, Dear master of whim and rhyme.
Love & Misty Light, EA
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scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
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2006-03-21
10:43 AM
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A stirring write Sy. Keep on dreaming. Well done!!believe in what your heart feels...
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Interloper
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
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2006-03-21
10:59 AM
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FROM OUT OF THE DEPTHS OF YOUR FERTILE POET MIND ANOTHER GREAT PIECE Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.
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cody 2
Junior Member
since 2006-03-12
Posts 48
london
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2006-03-21
12:33 PM
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you allways write with such passion, i enjoy
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
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2006-03-21
12:42 PM
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What's this? Another gentle beauty? Sir, you move my heart and so early in the morning too.
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2006-03-21
12:45 PM
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A most beautiful write dear Sy! Much enjoyed the read and the smile it gave me. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~~ Trace my body with your words, in doing so, you touch my heart ~
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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2006-03-21
12:46 PM
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From out the mist of time she came One evening in a dream of get An Eve of nude with flowing frame Stood in dew drops mornings let
this is proof of your poetic marvel...
profound!!!
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Mysteria
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
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2006-03-21
01:09 PM
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Now from that I can assume you are still a man very much alive and kicking Lovely Sy.
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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
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2006-03-21
03:00 PM
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I think Earth Angel may be right because love is important "over there". Lovely write!
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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
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2006-03-21
04:22 PM
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mmmmm.....mmmmmm.....mmmmmm -- delicious imagery, Sy, and wonderful to read! ....jo
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Magnus
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
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2006-03-21
06:54 PM
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superbly done, ain't it fun when we dream?
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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2006-03-21
07:16 PM
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Earth Angel Perhaps you are right. Hugs
scorpio I'll do that. Thank you.
Interloper Thank you my friend.
cody 2 Without passion there would be no poetry.
Lady A beautiful reply, thank you.
Nancy Thank you sweety.
LeeJ You are such a generous commentor.
Sharon Alive yes but not doing much kicking. LOL
Honeybunch Lovely reply, thank you.
iliana mmmmmmmmmm thank you.
Magnus Well it is for me. LOL
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