Open Poetry #37 |
If You Only Knew That Girl |
Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
I know I'm the lucky one to have a friend - like you. Yet, I know you're not the one to tell me what to do. You know my story. You know my pain. You know my glory. You know my shame. You've seen my worst days, you've seen my best, listen close... now hear the rest! If you only knew that girl. If you only knew what hazel can eyes say. If you only knew that girl, then you'd only, then you'd only, say... If you only hold her close. If you only tell her that you need her so. If you only make the most of the time you spend with her. I been here, baby, for so long you know, I'm leaving... even though I'll be gone away, I know you know this feeling. You know my story. You know my pain. You know my glory. You know my shame. You've seen my worst days, you've seen my best, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this, sounds almost like a song |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Ah Kathy! Your musician side is showing and I like it a lot. Excellent. I love your subject. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful write! I love it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
it was fantastic and true which is fantastic because it's relateable you are very talented. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A wonderful song, Kathy. Enjoyed all of this... |
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