Open Poetry #37 |
Buttons, Twisting like a Valve |
Buttons Junior Member
since 2006-02-27
Posts 34 |
Consuming energy what a waste of opening and closing of valves When one quick movement in maddening haste can Unbutton heartsent delves. Then, past upon the shelves to be covered with mites and dust. Having had kitty bites and bleeding rust Gone with all the trust. Too bad; gone with all the trust With exposure, gone the sensual lust Man has turned to rust, gone essential trust. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
trust is a big issue, Buttons...sometimes I have my buttons pushed a bit, never had them twisted M |
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Buttons Junior Member
since 2006-02-27
Posts 34 |
thank you for your response; twisting those valves closed seems like a better option for me. I could open, but would I ever completely trust again? No, just not worth my energy. I'll put it where it can be used in a more positive manner. Thanx again for your response. Buttons |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sometimes you just have to take the chance and trust again...it isn't easy. M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Interesting poem. I enjoyed it. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Buttons, I don't think I've welcomed you yet. Sounds like trust is gone and that is sad. It's like the loss of innocence. Interesting comparison. Welcome to PIP. I hope you will find a warm family here. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seconding Jo in the welcome, Buttons. Interesting read, and hope to read more of your work soon. |
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