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What Spring? |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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It was supposed to be easy it was supposed to be forever for life for eternity now I just sit here empty hollow searching for that ray of hope that is elusive tonight very elusive while my thoughts randomly spill onto the page with no particular rhythm or direction for me to follow so I continue to spin in this endless dance of life and heartbreak and pain while outside the snow refuses to melt and inside the words refuse to flow and deeper inside my heart refuses to admit that I'm broken |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I know the type of writing you refer to, when you just feel like writing, but in your case I think it came out pretty darn good  Yours truly ~Broken~ "Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, for what is given can be taken away." |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"my heart refuses to admit that I'm broken" Heartfelt Rhonda. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There is sadness here but you just see, there will be light to burn the snow away, just look ahead and let the breath of summer into your heart...enjoyed the words not the sadness..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is heartfelt, and I like the imagery you use!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most excellent write Rhonda.. and just think...Spring arrives tomorrow. Not a moment too soon. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
*hugs* Enjoyed Andrew |
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