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Open Poetry #37

Until The Last Moment

wounded eagle
New Member

since 2005-12-24

Posts 5

0 posted 2006-03-18 05:29 PM

I march to the sound of drums,
Beating out the songs of war.
For freedom and peace, I fight,
With God's help, I implore.

I open my heart to my enemy,
For I have seen the glory of the Lord.
As he now walks beside me,
I shall lay down my sword.

I will still fight for freedom,
I will still fight for peace.
No weapons, will I carry,
Only my words, to make them cease.

Until the last moment,
With the final breath I take,
I will continue the battle,
For all humanities sake.

Now I have found the true
Peace and freedom I seek.
As I make my way to heaven,
To sit at God's feet.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-03-18 05:33 PM

A most excellent write!
Welcome to Passions.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-03-18 06:03 PM

I enjoyed the theme and your presentation. thank you, for sharing your heartbeat.

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

3 posted 2006-03-18 06:38 PM

I enjoyed the content's meaning of this poem.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-03-18 11:55 PM

Very enjoyable read.

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