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Can I pretend
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Can I pretend |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) 
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Can I pretend we're in love, that it's me your thinking of? Can I pretend you need me, like I need you? I'll sail away on the wings of a dove, if I can pretend we're in love. I'll tell you of all the places, we'll never go. Can I send a kiss upon the wind, pretend your more than just a friend? Love is just a fantasy anyway. Can I hold you in arms of imagination, pretend your love is my salvation? Can I pretend... For all the beautiful ladies here at Pip that I'm so in love with. Maybe I should add that I do believe in love. That I have a beautiful wife of 24 years that is happy that I find inspiration in your tales of love. :-) [This message has been edited by StevenS (03-14-2006 11:07 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Steven The inner beauty of a person becomes clear within poetry....it is easy to love within that and because of that. I know that I have felt such a draw. This is a lovely, and honest poem that makes me smile. And, want to give you one of these....  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful... absolutely beautiful...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hun, can't speak for the other ladies, but you can be in love with me any ol time...what else is there????  this is universal poetry at it's best... Hugs |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Martie and Gentle Sprit, and Leej, I was so afraid I had given the wrong impression. God bless you, I do love you! :-) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Enchantress, I'm glad to see your little smily face. :-) |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
ohhh! the gist of wist--and smiles ... thank you Steven. You inspired a reply! ~ Karen ~  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Neat poem! Ah, love? Reality of fantasy? I liked your poem very much. misc'e |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Please Steven, send me a kiss upon the wind. Sigh... beautiful poem. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I'm not one of the PiP ladies, but I need your lovin' too. I begin each morning, feeling like a bride. I rest my head on my pillow at night and breathe a contented sigh over all I gave birth to during the day. I do feel amazingly pink and pastel. LOL I love ya, brother. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
I can hardly wait Klassy! Sweet inspiration welcome home! :-) Thanks Misc'e, my best work is born of love. Like LeeJ said "What else is there?" Sending a big wet one Lady, Did you get the one I sent last night? :-) Pink and Pastel Uriah? LOL You must really need a hug bro! :-) On the way! :-) |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Such an up lifting poem and I like it!!! There is so many forms of love that we can always find one that fits just right Debo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, thank you Debo for bumping this little lovely back up into the light of day! I would have missed this bit o' lovin' from Steve's heart ~ and missed XO's adorable reply as well. Steve, I'm a pip woman and I would love to be part of this love fest!  Love in all its forms is a beautiful thing!  Here's a  for you being such a sweetie pie and for appreciating the fairer sex! ~ Ooops! Did I say "sex"? My halo must be slipping!  Linda  |
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mariae Member
since 2006-04-24
Posts 54Denmark, Europe |
Very nice :-) Think it's good you have a wife so you don't have all us pip-girl tailing you :-) Maria -In a world of thoughts- |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
With reality so cruel, I've retreated to a pretend world. *S* I like this very much, Steven... You've given many much-needed smiles! *S* |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
In my effort to reply this morning you would have though I was starting a book. But with our little California Flower girl on my mind this morning I reread her reply to this poem. I realized she had said everything I had hoped and tried to say. I do have a love for each of you that I don't quite understand. It is as love always is I guess undefinable but much more than pretend. Thank you all! I find a song in each of your hearts, you too Uriah which may be the most fun to write. God Bless! :-) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Steven , sweet write , I loved your fantasy flight Hope |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Thank you Hope, with me it's flap your wings till you fly or sit down and cry. I do both, but prefer to fly. Glad you enjoyed!:-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're a charmer  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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