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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Odd I dreamt of you in minds embrace Ferment within illusions space Thoughts entwined in shuttle rhyme Planned each moments subtle time We met within a low lit club Magic potions wet the grub Browsed among the rainbow light Music filled our hearts delight We opened up the options door And tangoed on the dancing floor Where mood and movement bent the seem And mellow feel sewed up the dream We leaned into the fantasy Weaving movement’s ecstasy Swayed naïve in moods believe Arms and legs beyond conceive Captured by the fleet of charm Sleeps embracing full disarm Where mind can reach its ends content Without realities consent It is a way that I pursue But truth, it may not work for you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not so odd... but loveable? Yes! Tango on! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
May I have the next dance Sy? Hugs to you....and a kiss or two.  ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Captured by the fleet of charm Sleeps embracing full disarm Where mind can reach its ends content Without realities consent." Sy, you are a wonderful dancer!  ....jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"We leaned into the fantasy Weaving movement’s ecstasy" And the hits just keep on coming! I could dance to this one too! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And sometimes it seems we dance to the rhythm of life without our own consent but who can decry such a wonderful jive that leads to the new and untried? Loved dancing to your words. Helen |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
For the record, the dang alarm always messes up mine...usually at just the right moment. How does it know? Thanx Sy, good to see someone else has those dreams that make us want to "play it again, Sam"..... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sy...I believe I just found my favorite by you! Your meter and rhyme in this piece are simply flawless and I love your choice of words  Ruth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I'll do my best.  Enchantress You are on my card. iliana Dancer, not really, LOL Lady Yes I do lean into fantasy, thank you. Helen Loved your comment, thank you dear. Barry, A clue would be, you set the time. LOL hoot Right now I could go for one of your wonderful hugs. |
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