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Open Poetry #37

The Lizard Queen

bubblesleave
Member

since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

0 posted 2006-03-12 11:15 PM

Maybe the desert wind knows her name,

or has heard it

echoed in an ancient land.
Her beauty is golden and IS her right!

Long worshiped by the sun, and the ages,

SHE

outshines the popular - the commercial - the t.v. skinned

conception of

the "perfect" female.... with a simple gaze.
Her words burn into the skies and into my mind

as she holds her court of the dunes.
The lizard queen:

eyes bright, straight chin and nose of lighting, oh, such

classic beauty!
Every night now, I wonder:

can she be held

after sunset, or,

would her smile

simply burn my dreams into morning mirages?

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-03-18 11:29 AM

I like this....it would look more appealing if your line spaces were more consistent...
(just a suggestion)

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

2 posted 2006-03-18 04:56 PM

Cool! :-)

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-03-19 05:36 PM

"can she be held

after sunset, or,

would her smile

simply burn my dreams into morning mirages?"

Greatly enjoyed bubbles. I like your style.

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