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Open Poetry #37

Going West

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-03-11 09:24 PM

The sun
Settles down
Below the horizon

The last sky of day
Is red purple
With a final blue

Boats in the harbor
Seem to sigh
On the heaving sea
Their bells chime
In low tones

The shadows of couples
Slowly wander
A ship’s lights
Beneath lambent stars

All immersed
In an immense silence

Without comment
Past
Or fear

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2006-03-11 09:29 PM

Fading so gracefully....another lesson for aspiring writers -- well done.

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-04-27 03:15 PM

truly graceful. Let life be like this.

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