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Open Poetry #37

lil bro and saint sony

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-03-10 08:02 AM

the donut shop cornu'cop'ia
of black and white fright mares
herding the spray pain boys

down to the tin gin for new prints
and an exercise in uniformity
the jump suit kind

twenty four hour fast forwards
in slow-mo delaying daydreams
of reputations of jaunty

in a wobble bucket surrounding
of dodging and hiding under skirts
that say they had difficult lives

just like their movie screen mommas

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daark

scribnote: blamegame justify and a new white wall..how could any artist refuse.

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

1 posted 2006-03-10 08:44 AM

Budding Picasso's? framed in black and white, no doubt, if you ask them! Love your phrasing, Daark, with a certain street charm of it's own that can't resist a "wobble bucket surrounding"

Karen

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-03-10 05:16 PM

Love your poem Stranger and your scribnote too.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2006-03-10 07:13 PM

enjoyed

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