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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA 
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When the light came through your lies the impact was so great it broke her heart to tell you she’s not your little girl anymore All her work from then until now has been to prove you wrong… and she thought that she could fly but you cut her wings so often she never made it off the ground you walked on her dreams and then expected her to love you because you gave her life when what you did was pirate her memories leaving her with nothing to treasure |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"when what you did was pirate her memories leaving her" You have a great empathy for children Caroline. I enjoyed this piece very much. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
works of inspiration and works to ponder well presented a poet who cares |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very good. martyjo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well written, the sadness is felt "was pirate her memories leaving her with nothing to treasure" M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The mistreatment of children breaks my heart ~ as it so apparently does yours. ~ An exceptionally moving write from your compassionate heart.  EA |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I acquiesce in silence...this unfolds before me in a similar scenario. You've penned perfectly the bitter reaction to a shattered hero.  SadKaren |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
Very nice! |
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