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Beyond the Pale
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Beyond the Pale |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Beyond the Pale Stoically he nethers my world completely unfurls my sails as he propels he prevails through the gales goes once then again beyond the pale and I would sail away with him he sights me highlights me then cleverly, wittily delights me brightens my way every day sings the song of my heart delights in my art gallantly adds chivalry to bravery takes a bit of daring puts in all the caring and I would illuminate his night I look for him I see his soul young in old a bard of gold old he’ll never be the graying is just a way to see a fantasy of haunted light and I would treasure him tenderly For his soul glows rose O do concur with me this coveted man captures poetic plan painting in motion safe harbor from ocean harbor thee my art steal command seize my hand and I would listen to learn again for he’s stolen mine heart all along in the course of prairie song it’s not wrong to long, to subsist like this, written bliss smells sweet and then to breath him in so to thee from whom I derive all that makes me alive for it is how you play the words that pay the tribute kind now please don’t mind me when I say ~*~ You may have your way with your words as you discern ~ that they do not escape unheard but beg to be spoken, so solid gold slips these tokens from my lips to your ear hear me now in whisper soft for you wing me aloft and raise me again to new fancies of height finger with me the stars at night under a pale moon’s faint light to receive sun’s delight all these the reasons be why you linger beyond the pale ~*~ Revised, Repost Circa 2002 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 wow! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....There are many men at passions that this could apply to, me thinks. And, I would add my voice to yours, can I please?  |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"and I would sail away with him" . . . and he would be one happy man!  Robert |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
To be written so.....he is a lucky man, and I hope he fully knows the extent of it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
I would agree with ed, to be written of as this is a treasure.....as are you fine poet |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I can't seem to get beyond the pail ~~ I keep stepping in it! ~~ sorry ~~ Impulse Boy simply couldn't resist! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL @ Jamie... whose antics gave me my voice back... for Sunshine's poem took my hands from the keyboard... and I'm not sure she could have heard my applause. *S* |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Such devotion woven from the fine silken threads of your words Karilea, to make a fine tribute fit for any noble heart to lay upon..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ummm...yeah, you did that thing you tend to do every now and again....WOW... this is an extremely fine penning and uh....ummm..yeah... definately angels....  a true find for m'treasure chest MommaK... |
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Buttons Junior Member
since 2006-02-27
Posts 34 |
Wow!Your poem rocks! Buttons |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and I would sail away with him" So would I! He sounds wonderful. Sigh.... |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
the phone rang while I was reading this... it was my sweetheart, who hates poetry... he wanted me to look up something for him... I said wait.. I'm reading. He said I need it now. I said SO DO I! HUSH! and much too good for the likes of his red neck *wink*, so I will keep it under my pillow and dream!! Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine With this poem you have flown through the needles eye.  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
A work of art! 'Propelling' is a good word for it! I'm flying off with this in a hurry! hugs, misc'e |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Sunshine, I read this when you posted it but I couldn't find words to express my awe. I though if I waited a day or two I would but it hasn't happened yet. All I can say is beautiful! :-) |
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