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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I can feel myself slipping back into that lonely abyss and I catch myself wishing not to be subjected to this again as we keep on going around and around never finding the middle or solid ground somehow forgetting about how it all began; before the tears, the sorrow and pain; You’re continually tripping over your deceit and bane. I must admit, that I miss that guy but I... I have no tears left to cry over the we that we were back then... I swear that I'm damned.... And… I miss my friend. seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and I catch myself wishing not to be subjected to this again AMEN sista...yanno, I know where your coming from... This was so such a likeness of what I felt some time ago....we are on the same page...but, yanno, we're never the same hun, we continually grow, through what is ours... Love and hugs to ya girl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sometimes the best healing come from the distance between the wound and the sun |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Touching work Gentle Spirit. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you all, for the words m'friends and for tolerating me while I purge a bit...but sometimes? Ya just get tired of it Almost feels like a sense of mourning... kinda like I just lost my best friend yanno?? sigh...........  seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (03-06-2006 09:01 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You'll know when the last word has been said. Yes, you will.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
had to come back...yanno Linda, I heard it said, once you reach 50, you go to bed fine and wake up with injuries...  and the sad part is, it's true...Hugs to you my friend...wishing you a bright and sunny day today, and thank you, girl for venting, I was beginning to think you were a Samurai or something mystical, supernatural...and ya know what...you are!!!  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This was sad in places..but with great honesty and courage you outlined your heart and thoughts..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna It is because of love that you miss your friend...and it may feel like you are damned at the moment, but instead, I believe that you are blessed. One day you will see it that way too! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sending heart hugs your way sweet lady. I felt this right to the very core of me. ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
if you do or don't, eh?  so, will you lock the heartdoor next time? naw |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
luv ya gal I am so sorry you're going through this, time will heal, and open new doors for you....hugsss hon....And so it those we live with |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
oh this is so well written, for I have lived this a million times (well maybe not quite that many, but so it seems) hugs girl |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Straight and honest, cleanly written, and....sigh....that other thing about what it says....makes me want to go off by myself for a little while.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
I cant help but wonder if perchance you got your infernal vortex from same place I got mine. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
I think I know his sister. :-) It is so painful when our paths in life seperate from someone we care for. You made feel that! God Bless! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
good to see and enjoy reading your words Donna, even if a bit painful and purging... and of course I can understand how this is~~ to you and AprilM |
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