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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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yesterday is across the street in the big white house with too much makeup and too little warm she waves sometimes when she is in the yard with the lace apron on over the gown of her statue and I wonder of her eyes how does stone feel when it is kissed softly at the edge of tear places or would she even know and I wonder of her hands if i broke them from their pose and bound them palm parallel could I teach her how to pray ________________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She would most likely pray for release...  Your insight never ends... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
hmmmmm, no trespassing ordinances? Arms open and palms up are much better when one prays...Do stone eyes write in lava upon the heart? And how long can they hold the warmth of the sun? ~ Klassy ~ |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
and I wonder of her eyes how does stone feel when it is kissed softly at the edge of tear places You never cease to amaze me. Caroline |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger A not so subtle poem. Enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely sculpted imagery, DS, as always. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I think you could soften any hard substance with a poem or two.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
gracious pipfamily..thanks to each of you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and I wonder of her eyes" oohhhh... you certainly do know how to mold words to your will Stranger. Perfecto! |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Mr. Stranger, I like this one a lot. Your poetry is like a kaleidoscope... so many meaningful colors. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you could soften one~ as easily ~ as you could harden another~ My spirit will rise |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow...D that is amazing..very very cool write...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks friends for the reads..you all bless me with your touch |
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