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Dreams Villanelle |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Why do you enter my inner sight, Coming to me when my dreams play Losing you again at the end of night. Maybe I lust for your sweet delight And I miss the touch of you in the day Why do you enter my inner sight? Why do I worry about wrong and right In the bright when in dark you come my way, Losing you again at the end of night. Why has this mixing become my plight What could I do to make this dream to stay, Why do you enter my inner sight? My eye are red and shun the bright I no longer wish for another day Losing you again at the end of night. I hold you so close, firm and tight Hoping the hold will make you stay Why do you enter my inner sight, Losing you again at the end of night. Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Villanelles are hard to write but you did a good job. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you my Friend just tossing a few words out Pleased you enjoyed. Gloom |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Why do you enter my inner sight, Losing you again at the end of night." Well written and very touching. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful write... I enjoyed this very much! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoy your dreams M |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Poignant, melancholic and memorable. Thank you for the moments. - Owl |
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