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Open Poetry #37

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-03-06 10:28 PM

A glimpse
Became a scene
Though it had no
Such ambitions

Yet something in the mind
It was passing through
Said Hello

You know
It said without word
You remind me
Of something someone
I knew before

I too became
No more than a dream just passing through
To wherever we’re bound to go

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

1 posted 2006-03-08 02:56 PM

Beautiful, this is... I too have had these kind of moments, but am usually too busy to reflect on them. Thank you for taking the time to do so, and in the process, reminding me that I should be more observant... as you are.

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

Edward Grim
Senior Member

since 2005-12-18

Posts 1154
Greenville, South Carolina

2 posted 2006-03-08 03:06 PM

Well done, Huan Yi. I always enjoy reading your poetry. Cheers - Ed

“True absurdism is not less but more real than reality”
- John Simon

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Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2006-03-08 03:10 PM

Oh you do have a touch....there are many poets whose work I like, some I like and admire....but very few I envy!

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Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-04-23 04:12 PM

must be Blueskaya.

beautiful poem.

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