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Grief
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Grief |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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The loss What am I to do The sky darkens There are no stars |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
John....The stars will come back, even though you feel the loss forever.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exactly the feelings of grief.. well done! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Grief is a cloud that blots the stars when the sun returns it will shine like white gold rain makes it less ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
One click... and I find 2 incredible poems. *S* I've written what feels like reams on the subject... without capturing the essence you did in a few words... Excellent! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
starless and moonless the night grieves its shadows the moourning overcomes |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
while not typically a fan of exaggerated brevity in poetry, the simplicity of this piece sparked melancholy - i imagine such was the intent. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
every body will feel like this. |
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