Open Poetry #37 |
Transendent thoughts |
Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
My hart beats Will I think? Will my lungs Bring me to the brink? Of life and death Without a thought Through reactions That can’t be taught So when I act And do not see Can that be The real me? Or are we all Just that way? When we don’t think Of what to say Am I wrong For letting it flow? Should I change Or just let it go? I feels wrong Not to feel Like I’m pulling myself Out of the real Making me like all the same will it put me through a life of shame? my past has been full of grief and now I’m looking for relief so I’ll change do it another way so thing can get better someday |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
welcome back home, Matt "my past has been full of grief and now I’m looking for relief" wishing you relief, and happiness |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
This piece is very genuine and true to life. I like your style, very nice. Cheers - Ed “True absurdism is not less but more real than reality” |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
"I(t) feels wrong Not to feel" Why? If you don't you don't. There's no abstract obligation. And perhaps it the best indication leading to why not. Change for what? How often can you air brush yourself into the appropriate emotion? John |
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