Open Poetry #37 |
A Brighter Tomorrow |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A Brighter TomorrowI continue to struggle on It wouldn't be so bad, if only I didn't have to do it alone There are those times, when I Feel like just giving up But, I am not one to give in Even though it seems too rough Everyday, I make myself rise To face another day Hoping that in the day that passed Is where my troubles will stay Sometimes, my life is filled with So much fear inside That all I want to do is to lay down And do nothing, but cry That isn't what I do, though I continue to struggle through Because, I tell myself Tomorrow is one brand new Although the sun doesn't shine Tomorrow, it may shine brighter And, once again my life may be A whole lot happier So, each and everyday I wake I rise to face another day Hanging on to the hope My life will then be okay By Sue 3-4-06 |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Your life will be better than okay. Each day is new, and it is our chance to start over, erase mistakes, have a clean slate. I have learned lately, that looking back just hurts my neck. I think you already knew that. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So good to read you again Sue. You have come so far, and each day brings with it opportunity that is vast. Patience is the most difficult trial that we humans face. Loved this one. TD |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sue, I want you to know that you are never alone in the battle of facing tomorrow. Some days, it is much easier than others, but you always continue on, and I know you will never give up. Well written Sue seek the flame within yourself |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet Sue, you certainly are smarter than the average chick! Love you! ~ and keep the faith my friend! Linda |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Remember each day , it means a little more you have progressed Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Not to worry you will be fine. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Hanging on to the hope" Hang on tight to the hope SmartChick. This poem has a lot of meaning for me. Thank you for sharing the poem and your courage. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
We all have rough times, Sue, but not everyone has the right attitude to see them through! It is a blessing that you do. Keep your chin up. ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQuzie~ 'Tomorrow is one brand new' You bet your sweet bippy it is !! And YOU are finding the brighter side of things and my dear ... there are many more to come~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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