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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-01-14 02:20 AM



Somewhere In A July


On a warm silky night
somewhere in a July,
I wondered why you would
want to kiss a man like me;
not rich,  not famous,
nor overly handsome.
No particular reasons why,
I would catch such a
lovely womans eye, and you
would pull me close to you,
on a warm silky night
somewhere in a July.


JamesLee
January 12
2006



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iliana
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1 posted 2006-01-14 03:15 AM


That's so sweet!  I hope you gave it to her, JamesLee.   ...jo
Deep_Inside
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2 posted 2006-01-15 06:45 AM


hay this is a grate poem why haven't ppl seen it? i really like have much you've gotten across is such a selected amount of words
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just out of reach
3 posted 2006-01-15 10:44 AM


lovely James.
much enoyed
hugs, Chris

silverwind
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that place over there
4 posted 2006-01-15 03:16 PM


Lucky guy.
silverwind

RedStoneEB
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5 posted 2006-01-15 04:09 PM


Love is more than money and looks its about finding that person you like and love
CMGrimm
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6 posted 2006-01-15 04:41 PM


I often wonder the same things about my wife...lol

lovely poetry

chris

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-01-15 11:30 PM



I love it. Lucky lady that recieves this poem.



mighty mouth
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8 posted 2006-01-16 12:13 PM


Captures beautifully the wondrous feeling of a first kiss, or even the hundredth...what words to tell their meaning. Well done!
Constance
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9 posted 2006-01-17 11:52 PM


Sweet and lovely James. Made me go all "gooshy" inside.

smiles,
Constance

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2006-12-21 03:00 AM


Thank you Constance, mighty mouth, The Lady, CM Grim, RedStone, Silverwood, Nightshade, Deep Inside and ilaina for the wonderful responses...James
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