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one laugh too late
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since 2006-03-05

Posts 3
Kentucky, USA

0 posted 2006-03-05 02:01 PM

I never knew what to say
and I never knew what to do
But I know everytime I said, "Goodbye"
I really meant, "I love you."

I said, "goodbye" a million times
and, still you never knew
that everytime I said, "goodbye"
I really meant, "I love you."

You ran to me so often
and held me when I'd cry
I never knew when you said, "I love you"
you really meant, "Goodbye."

You told me so many times, "I love you"
and picked me up so I could fly
Little did I know when you said, "I love you"
you really meant "goodbye"

-Carissa-

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2006-03-05 02:26 PM

Carissa

I love the way you turned the words around in this poem....ya know...sometimes saying goodbye is what love has to do. Welcome to Passions!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-03-05 02:30 PM

Dear Carissa, Welcome to Passions!
Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

3 posted 2006-03-05 10:25 PM

I like how you write. You have a stark way of making your point, and it works well.

Caroline

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-03-06 04:33 PM

Carissa...

I too enjoyed the turnabout of words. Well done! Welcome.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-03-06 05:35 PM

Welcome to Passions Carissa!
A wonderful entrance post this is!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2006-03-06 07:08 PM

A wonderful entrance post you have written here. Welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy your time here as you get to know us, and we get to know you.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

7 posted 2006-03-08 02:58 PM

oh I love this, how sad and beautiful,
welcome

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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8 posted 2006-03-08 03:22 PM

Yes...that is very much the meaning of the word.

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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

9 posted 2006-03-08 04:24 PM

Very Nice Indeed. I also like the twist of words in this. Good Job

Rich

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