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It Was Written In The First Star Birth
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It Was Written In The First Star Birth |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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It Was Written Into The First Star Birth 4 August 2001 You make my sky tremble on the lip prints of a song ... a wind song of forest whispers and beguiling waters that tell tales of long ago and of the slow æons of tear drop secrets that formed and grew in moss and fern and lichen and painted you and me in primordial destiny. - Owl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh my Diana, this is so tender and lovingly soft...absolutely a breathtaking write sweetie. Loved this  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you very much Donna, for your kind words. - Owl |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"on the lip prints of a song ..." Couldn't get more delightful Diana. I love this. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
and of the slow æons of tear drop secrets that formed and grew in moss and fern and lichen and painted you and me in primordial destiny amazingly lovely.. you write extremely well. This is gorgeous  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Each line is sumptuously delectable!  Linda |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Kate, Caroline and Earth Angel for your very kind words. Earth Angel, like the rest of us, I am still sending continuous prayers, thoughts and healing wishes to return you to the best of health. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem. May rest and heal be your watchwords. I realise that it will be some time before you are out of the woods, but I am looking forward to hearing that you are back in the sunlight with us. - Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for the kind and loving words. I do appreciate your continued prayers. God has been listening.  Hugs with love, Linda |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am glad that you are getting better, Earth Angel. God always listens, doesn't He? The prayers for your recovery will continue long after you have regained complete health and have sustained it for a long while. I am not sure whether my reply went in before I ran out of airtime and had to recharge my phone, so forgive me if the gist of this is in twice. My replies don't always show immediately, so I would rather get my reply in twice than not at all. - Owl |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I wish I had written this poem....right now, today, wish I had written it. That's all there is to say. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is wonderful praise from such a talented and sensitive writer. However, at least you can borrow it to read and enjoy. Thank you so very much, Ed. - Owl |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Owl you have found a perch in my heart. :-) So beautiful! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Ohhh! You have exquisitely painted the trappings of the heart, primordial, indeed! How many of us can relate to history of lifetimes? I don't know, but you capture that feeling of loving through eternity... gorgeous! ~ Karen |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Steven, and how safe and warm I feel on that perch! Thank you Klassy Lassy. Unfortunately (. . . well fortunately, I suppose, in retrospect), his love dried up, although it was a little more complicated and a lot better and a lot worse than that. - Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
that formed and grew in moss and fern and lichen and painted you and me in primordial destiny Your images are so lovely... the commitment is even more so. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Diana Love like that you describe in this poem, lasts past ends and new beginnings, and just forever is! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you suthern for your kind and gentle words. Thank you Martie for understanding my poem and me so well. - Owl |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Regardless of the man come and gone, this poem is timeless and I so enjoyed it! You write beautifully, Klassy |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It's a beautiful poem Diana. I have to agree with Ed... there are some poems you just wish were yours. This is one of those. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Penetrating. JL |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Klassy Lassy and Kate, I am honoured that such excellent poets as you both, would say that to little old me! Thank you. Thank you JL for appreciating my poem. - Owl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I will be reading more of yours, definitely! An excellent piece, very uplifting and gives me hope |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
passing shadows, thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it and happy that it gave you hope. - Owl |
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