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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You have woven a web, so tangled filled with deception and lies unsympathetic are these ears as they ignore the tears that flows falsely from your eyes. Did it come as no surprise that you'd be caught in this game, and did it not occur to you that you wouldn't be thought of the same as you were, just yesterday; before it was realized that the web you spun was fraying and that you might end up being despised? Silken threads have slowly unraveled with the passing of each night because my Dear, you never expected that your untruths would come to light. There is no turning back, nor is there a way to make this disappear you've been caught in your own web.... So? How's it feel my dear, to know that time has burst your bubble and unwoven your web, so troubled.... In a triangle of deceit dishonesty, truth will always defeat this game... obsolete. When I get where I'm going I will love and have no fear When I get where I'm going don't cry for me down here...(B. Paisley) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noosed up good///enjoyed it Donna |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Donna... Truth does indeed prevail. Love ya lady~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The truth will out..great write Donna..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
It's amazing how they never believe that they will be found out, but they always are, sooner or later - and the later, the worse it is for them. I am sure it was a cathartic experience to write this. Keep smiling and winning! - Owl |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"In a triangle of deceit dishonesty, truth will always defeat this game... obsolete." Good for you....writing this!!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is a tremendous write, Donna. You are so right, too -- the truth always comes out eventually. ....jo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No, didn't raise nothing but a smart kid here...  |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Well said! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Donna, you express yourself so well. Loving is so vulnerable and such a powerful emotion, but hardening my heart is not an option. I just throw a fit and get over it. Some might say, the door swings both ways, but it's how you walk through it, hopefully with your head held up high. Hugs, honey~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"So? How's it feel my dear, to know that time has burst your bubble and unwoven your web, so troubled...." Yes! I love the way you tell it! |
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