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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
I'm laughing. I should be listening. I'm freezing. I should be burning up. I'm creeping. I should be running. I'm speaking now, by shutting up. I'm looking. I should shut my eyes. I'm seeking what was found. I'm open now for alibis. I'm listening, but can't hear a sound. I'm crying. I should be laughing still. I'm calling you, but you don't hear. I'm waiting on you wait too long. I'm dying here, but you don't care! |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
I REALLY LIKE THIS! ONE THING THOUGH I'm waiting on you wait too long. I AM NOT SURE I UNDERSTAND THIS LINE. HELP! LOVE LIGHT LAUGHTER I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kathy, I like the way you did this! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Very touching Kathy! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I'm looking. I should shut my eyes. I'm seeking what was found. I'm open now for alibis. I'm listening, but can't hear a sound Excellent, Kathy!  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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bubblesleave Member
since 2006-03-04
Posts 197Bloomington, IN |
"I'm speaking now by shutting up" Brillant! Sharon |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Conflicting emotions are the path to wisdom, for such emotions lead to experience, and from experience we gain wisdom. Well said. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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