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Open Poetry #37

Take me away

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2006-01-13 07:36 PM

Now I see myself it
an't so clear, all I
see is another clouded
minds of fear

The sparkle in the
eyes are gone the
blue has gone grey
has come back to you

Come over invade my
soul, rescue me once
again with your magic
touch

Just so I can be someone
else for a little while
be the one to make me
smile

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

1 posted 2006-01-13 09:15 PM

Come over invade my
soul, rescue me once
again with your magic
touch

Just so I can be someone
else for a little while
be the one to make me
smile

this caught my eye , nice work foxy
well said : ) ~wolfie

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor
and with crystal key in secrecy
he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien
( the adventure

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2006-01-13 10:16 PM

Know that feeling....jo

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

3 posted 2006-01-13 10:34 PM

wow can relate here, thanks for sharing this write, keep up the awesome poetry.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2006-01-14 01:15 AM

Lovely, foxyoasis.

- Owl

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

5 posted 2006-01-14 01:38 AM

thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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