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Open Poetry #37
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0 posted 2006-03-01 05:50 PM

Metro

Steel teeth waves
descend,
falling into
subterranean depths.
chill breath
from its black hole
a rattle and a roar
from wyrm to worm
it lurches on
squeezed through earth
of cold stone tunnels
till it flies across the river.

Miserable Static
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1 posted 2006-03-01 10:47 PM



Seems dismal Andrew... a good write.

LukeMW
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2 posted 2006-03-01 10:51 PM

as a big fan of ginsberg, kerouac and bob dylan, i love this writing style. great poem, although i didn't get the one line "from wyrm to worm"
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