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In and Out Of Conciousness
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In and Out Of Conciousness |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US 
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why did it have to go down like that a slap in the face with nothing left on the plate accept a broken heart sliced in two throwing away what i loved so much. You. what went wrong that you did it in front of my face i could not let it go so i kept searching for you denying everything you did an trying to make it not true but knowing what i saw i couldn't change Why , Why , Why? why does it have to be this way? trust a thing i dont believe in much and you proved it again that its none left in this land in and out of consciousness i go couldnt shake the pain away even while awake i cryed inside but no tears fell on the out put my head back on my pillow and continued the nightmare waking up by the sound of the alarm clock felt dead inside still couldnt shake this dream but its only a dream why was it so real just the thought makes me tremble over losing you to something so unreal couldnt let it go til i was on my two feet still can't believe it was only a dream but i can breathe again knowing you love me still I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Thank goodness it was only a dream. You had me going there... Love your poetry! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lots of suspense in here, and anxiety that twists our hearts! then, you straighten us all out with that ending...well done! |
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