Open Poetry #37 |
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Knowing The Ache, Of Not Know |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
I have felt that ache of knowing that I can never know the feel, the touch that would cause me to reel... to be all tied up inside.. and Yes, I do hide from the pain of my desire within this fire shame does not burn; but glowing embers can't match this yearning... churning in my soul~ I've written this so that you will know that I too, know the ache of 'not know'. seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-13-2006 04:59 PM).] |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've felt that ache, too... and it can knock one to her knees, can't it? *S* You wrote it well, sweet lady! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
you certainly did write it well Donna. ~hugs~ ![]() Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Bella, have missed you! arghhh "to know the ache of not know" sigh... love your writes Bella ![]() btw.. love your new pic too ![]() m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more ~Neruda~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't it just so, that you are wise enough to know what you don't know? ![]() "It matters not this distance now" from Yesterday's Love KRJ |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*sigh* how many of us have known that ... ![]() and then He created the horse... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
So many of us relate to this, but only Gentle Spirit can write a Gentle Spirit poem about it! Beautiful, sensitive and so very, painfully sad. I wish you happiness of at least other kinds. - Owl |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is beautiful Donna. Made me feel like it was written for someone. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hi everyone, and thanks so much for your responses and kindnesses. It means so much to me! ![]() |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
SO BEAUTIFULLY AND SIMPLY RENDERED. A FEELING THAT IS SO FAMILIAR. BRAVO! I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
So sad... well done. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! How did I mis this wonderful write?!! Excellent Donna. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lately, myself, I've found some things are better left not known but I do understand these feelings here good to read you |
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