Open Poetry #37 |
Roses |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
It's a dance the blind leading the restless with your hands tied and your eyes open you'll never stop feel it in your bones? feel it rotting away the car is shaking with every body it hits corpse after corpse after corpse smells like roses this isn't a reflection of you this is what happens when you forget that the past is the past for a reason I can feel it on the back of my neck where you dug your nails into me and told me I was tense I could breathe you in you were so close and I did I did can you blame me smells like roses |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"this isn't a reflection of you this is what happens when you forget that the past is the past for a reason" Wonderful write exhale. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This feels maybe personal..there is metaphor here too..cryptic.. thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I am always a fan -Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Good poem,nice pic.............paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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