Open Poetry #37 |
coat room camphor |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
malted metal milage my teeth feel those edges like licking ribbons on camphor boxes but the birthing occurs 90 months of a moment you say the smile is worth it and it is the first of many you hope you make with me in this room of windows where you pretend to be that lust tree's limbs making shapes of our hours with your weaving fingers and punishing me slow often behind our secrets hidden as recess in your coat's room ________________ daark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Bubble, bubble toil and trouble. Enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Recess was my favorite class....I liked four square and teatherball the best....you put a whole new spin on the coat room. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sir sy, thank guy, I enjoy your comments _____________ ms martie, such a school charm you have, thanks for the eyes |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your ticket, sir... Enjoyed, DS... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine thank you for your warm |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"making shapes of our hours with your weaving fingers and punishing me slow often behind our secrets hidden as recess in your coat's room" Hmmmm... dark and oh, so fascinating. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady friend, thank you for watching this unravel |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
I have met this timeless language of yours somewhere before...but where? Oh well, lets chalk it down to a previous life....lol |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
recess was always fun~ My spirit will rise |
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