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Sleepless Nights
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Sleepless Nights |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US 
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Its 4 am in the morning and here im awake I can't sleep, and i dont no what to think I just lay here tossing and turning My mind blank Then I see her, she flashes in my head Who is she? I don't know I just met her yesterday She told me her name Its just a blur now i don't remember When I turned my music on put in my phones She was there dancing beside me Telling me things laughing with me She took my hand led me to the dance floor She set my mind at ease, she let me be Whatevers on my mind she understands She said "I've been there too" Sleepless nights I look at her through my vision I ask her " who are you?" She turned to me then slowly dissapeared Slipping through my reach Come back I call " tell me who you are" She no longer stands there I stand in the middle of the dance floor Standing there as if she never existed But she exist I know Just yesterday I met her I shook her hand And today I will see her again and again Its not just a dream its reality I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Makes two of us....I'm awake too, and with a dream I want to forget. I'm a lucid dreamer, but this one I couldn't control or change after the fact....so awake I am. I guess we'll spend the night together, separately! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
I love this poem. Great imagery. It drew me in and made me want to know more. Good job! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
tatalinia It's you and your shadow. Enjoyed |
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