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candles and starlight
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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candles and starlight those pretty eyes that made me wonder and dream of a night by the fireplace with just the candles and starlight far from the winters cold wind and snow beside you talking into the late hours telling each other our stories and wishes finding treasures within our hearts becoming good friends we found a little bit of everything when we met you have a magic glow about you i have fallen under your sweet spell of warmness yet outside my window it is a cool 10 degree's and the snow falls with a flurry of grace this evening it reminds me to take the time to love again and that beauty is right before my eyes whispering to me that it will be alright and that there is time in front of me to not forget to awaken from my slumber and to create these dreams and thoughts into a reality and that actions are the key and never to lose focus of my goals she is an angel in a icy cold world where shadows and deep ends lurk a light for me in this dark valley leading me out of the thicket and back into the fields of green to where the spring air awaits us soon and where the flowers blossom and bloom JW III 2-26-2006 In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"she is an angel in a icy cold world where shadows and deep ends lurk a light for me in this dark valley leading me out of the thicket and back into the fields of green to where the spring air awaits us soon and where the flowers blossom and bloom" This is lovely! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
she is an angel in a icy cold world where shadows and deep ends lurk a light for me in this dark valley leading me out of the thicket and back into the fields of green to where the spring air awaits us soon and where the flowers blossom and bloom Same lines for me, Iliana.....along with all the rest! What a wonderful poem! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thank you for the kind reply both of you , this was a hard one to write ,there is pain with love sometimes they seem to go together lol oh well i am glad i wrote it though... thanks again for reading my poem and leaving me your thoughts ... =] In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"whispering to me that it will be alright and that there is time in front of me to not forget to awaken from my slumber and to create these dreams and thoughts" Beautiful dream... beautiful poem. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Outstanding. Each line here is hemmed in the lace of courage. Not always easy to let the heart flow out. I do so enjoy your talent, and the gracious heart that shines in your writing. Couldn't pick a favorite line... TD |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
thankx =] much love ~wolf In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How beautiful this is!!! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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