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Saturate |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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The brain needs oxygen, His catacomb has got me by the chin. Could I have known? Now SATURATE! The phobia viewed, A life not renewed. Could I have known? Now SATURATE! This should be you cold and crippled, The price of lonliness tripled, Should I have known? SATURATE! NOW SATURATE! You're so cold keep your hand in line, The days of joy no longer shine. Could I have known? NOW SATURATE! NOW SATURATE! NOW SATURATE! I've become so cold and crippled, Could we have known? The phobie viewed now tripled. Cold and crippled.. NOW SATURATE!! Time brings change and change comes with time |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
I like this a lot.Good word choice. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Good job kiddo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Wow! |
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