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on Wednesday afternoon
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on Wednesday afternoon |
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smithdr Junior Member
since 2006-02-25
Posts 26 |
on Wednesday afternoon I dropped you off at the airport. not a tear was shed. you smiled and thought of marriage. I smiled back and rubbed my knees. I offered to help with the bags. you were fine. we parted ways with a short kiss, one of shortest we’ve ever had. I don’t remember waving goodbye as I drove away or glancing at the trouble you must have had carrying that huge packsack. I recall thinking: it’s a long drive home. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
This poem speaks loudly. Enjoyed the read. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to Passions, smithdr! Enjoyed this. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I like your style, its quite conversational and yet it is not immediately obvious am I making any sense? I didn’t think so Suffice to say I enjoyed the read, hope to catch some more of your work soon  Andrew |
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