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In a Meadow
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In a Meadow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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In a Meadow In a meadow by a brook Half in real and half in dream I sat and read a prophets book To music from the babbling stream It lifted me in serenade Into a snow white passing cloud And on my taste sweet lemonade Around my mind a prophets shroud It danced me in a gentle breeze Upon a rainbows colored floor And teased me in a gentle tease To open up forever’s door Its here illusion took my hand And opened up serenity And there I saw the timeless sand That spilled into eternity Its here the prophets words did still And steer into eternals spill |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good enough to become a   Thank you!  |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Wonderful ! It seems that it was not illusion that took your hand, but that it turned loose of it and allowed Truth to be seen. The truth that there is only...bliss. I enjoyed this, as I do all of your writings. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you my sweet.  XOx Uriah xOX Enjoyed your reply, thank you. |
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smithdr Junior Member
since 2006-02-25
Posts 26 |
I enjoyed this. Nicely written. David |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A meadow of winged monarchs and bloomed out purple withered upright faded to periwinkle iris I would bed with such color bogged and drowning green breezed with wild rose Listened stream of riffled rocks I am song too I hope you don't mine my replying with my meadow poem. I loved yours so perhaps you will love mine? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
smithdr Thank you so much. Martie I love yours.  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is flawless. and look, you've become a meter man! I think I've been there, by that babbling brook, and had similar dreams Exquisite, my dear friend Liz |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely read! Meadows are such peaceful things and I would hope for my eternity to be the same - just wondering how to make sure it happens. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A delight to see your name here. And yes it is a brook many have sat beside. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybunch Me too. Thank you dear. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your thoughts are so picturesque and soothing to ones soul. The colors you paint are brilliant in the glaring sun turning softer and more gentle beneath the shade. Sy, after reading your poetry I so often come away with peace of mind. It's all about the message you know!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A heart warming reply, thank you dear. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I want this story to continue....enjoyed what was there immensely but want more. ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana I'll see what I can do, thank you |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Fantastic write, Seymour.But then, I knew it would be. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you sweety. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
You make such pretty pictures and write such tranquility with your words. Thank you sir. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you for saying so. |
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