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Open Poetry #37

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CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-02-25 04:43 AM

I can feel your existence
within me
I have not seen your face
nor touched your skin
yet you have always been a part of me
hiding within my soul
and dancing in my eyes

sometimes, I can almost
touch you -
can feel your breath
lingering
perhaps I am too late
and you had just been there -

but only the mocking wind remains...

so I confront him
face to face -
but that impetuous wanderer
remains tight-lipped
and steals away,
nonchalantly typing
cryptic clues
on the blades of grass...

that prankster

just to think
that is all that stands
between
you
and
me

CG

[This message has been edited by CastleGuard (02-26-2006 12:51 AM).]

desert-spike
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 194
TX/USA

1 posted 2006-02-25 06:18 AM

So often true, alas.

That was highly visual, well flowing, and awe inspiring, I thought.

Nice work.

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2006-02-26 12:54 PM

Thank you, desert-spike, for reading and for your words of appreciation.

CG

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