Open Poetry #37 |
I Do Not Dream as Others Do |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I do not dream as others do Nor see the earth in earthly hue I do not want what boldly wreaks Of power etched in silver streaks Nor does desire lightly tip The pleasure-cup from which I sip For bliss can sweetly dignify The simple truth in mind and eye I dream in lavenders of dawn And draw the truth from dappled fawn My mold from stenciled pirouettes In scissor-cuts of silhouettes My joy from suns that hover high And moons that roll across the sky Within the dream of azure blue And misty silhouettes of you Elizabeth Santos |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, dear lady, was going to highlight some of my favorite parts, but indeed, when reading you, each and every line glows forth a testament of your faith, love and kindness...not to mention, that beautiful muse/spirit of yours. Hiya kiddo, so so happy to see you writing...your a pleasure to read, first thing this morning. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I sure do agree with LeeJ. I love your spirit-heart, Liz...it is so beautiful!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You do "mush" so well, yes you do! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Within the dream of azure blue And misty silhouettes of you" Rich images... lush words. Enjoyed. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Nor do I....for dreams have always been my forte'. This poem is absolutely beautiful! |
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