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Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

0 posted 2006-02-22 08:49 PM

where gulls glide

     across wind-blown water

           rippling like dragon scale

sunlight sword silver

     forged evening

                  deep

         a gray squirrel scouts solitude
          on boulder barricaded shoreline

  enguard,

       momentarily motionless

                       sea and sky

                              gather melancholy

channel distant clang

              of buoy bell


        dark hollows

               languish in lavender

                                  shadow

                   ...as do I

___________

Klassy Lassy
8/26/2005

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (02-23-2006 03:23 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-02-22 11:10 PM

I love it!
'tis a smooth and beautifully flowing write

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2006-02-22 11:13 PM

Beautiful!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-02-22 11:15 PM

I really love your work Karen. The title is a poem by itself.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2006-02-23 06:55 AM

a pleasure
to loiter
at lavender
in this window

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-02-23 07:19 AM

where gulls glide

     across wind-blown water

           rippling like dragon scale

sunlight sword silver

     forged evening

                  deep

you had me at hello, and took me on such a tranquil journey...I could feel the warmth of subservent nature...kindly melting away any hint of saddness...no thoughts of the world, just glidding somewhere by the sea...

Marvelous write

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2006-02-23 08:50 AM

So beautiful Karen...
I have to remind myself to breathe as I read your words.
Such grace..so lovely.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2006-02-24 12:15 PM

And we, with you. Your poetry heals the spirit and bathes it in a glow of peace.

- Owl

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

8 posted 2006-03-31 01:37 AM

oh, my! I think I forgot I had posted this. For I've failed to get to back to any of you. Thank you for sharing your time with me and my poem! I do so appreciate the feedback and comments.

I really must have been lost in lavender when I posted this! LOL

~ Karen

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

9 posted 2006-04-01 09:23 AM

Exquisitely peaceful Klassy! I can still hear that bouy bell clanging across the windblown waters of my mind! :-)

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