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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2006-02-21 07:58 PM

Don’t break ground, break molds

They shifted earth
once again, by the above, these
cultured beings, but not from
beneath, where millennium lives.

As for me,

I shall die on never time...
when airstreams are less
but resonance is more, and

when wolves howl to the sun;

I shall pass into some dimness
beneath old sol, but above la lune...
where fingers, fervent with fever,
only wish they could travel
one more time...

To shutter these eyes
just after the greening of dawn
burying myself deep
within some heartfelt thought

And if all that is left
is a shell, no mourners, then this
I believe
that in a fiery flash before passage
some one might know
before this exit, stage left,
sotto voce
some reminisce
of touch
may haunt those dreams.

Somehow, I hope they are yours.

For there is where
warm lives.

[This message has been edited by Soleil Noir (02-21-2006 08:35 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-02-21 08:06 PM

"I shall pass into some dimness
beneath old sol, but above la lune...
where fingers, fervent with fever,
only wish they could travel
one more time...

To shutter these eyes
just after the greening of dawn
burying myself deep
within some heartfelt thought"

Soleil~You have been away far too long.
I have missed your exquisite writing.
Please don't stay away so long again.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-02-21 09:29 PM

"when wolves howl to the sun"
to the heart of the matter
a beautiful way to remember

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

3 posted 2006-02-21 09:32 PM

This is beautiful...leaves me wondering...when will we see you again?

Shenachie

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

4 posted 2006-02-21 10:13 PM

Soon, Bridget, soon...

Kacy, sometimes the odds win...

Enchantress, I always read you. I am humbled by the miss.

There will be more...soon enough.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-02-21 10:28 PM

Oh my. I am speechless.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2006-02-21 10:32 PM

Soleil, my friend...it's very good to see you here!!

"before passage
some one might know
before this exit, stage left,
sotto voce
some reminisce
of touch
may haunt those dreams.

Somehow, I hope they are yours."

Very poignant...made me feel sad.

For there is where
warm lives.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2006-02-22 01:04 AM

Soleil Noir, we have missed you.

This poem is hauntingly beautiful, very much so.

....jo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2006-02-22 08:40 AM

ms sol, you stir the wolves
and the lava of pele
but then you knew that
when you dressed this
in the gauze of you

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2006-02-22 03:47 PM

Listen to the warm... *S*

This is beautiful writing that stays with the heart long after the eyes have moved elsewhere... Excellent!

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

10 posted 2006-02-23 08:54 PM

Deep. You are so very, very deep. One could drown and somehow, not mind.

~~J

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

11 posted 2006-02-24 12:07 PM

You certainly practice what you preach – you break moulds in the excellence of your poetry. May your exit from this stage be very far in the mists of the future so that we (and you) may enjoy the fruits of your mind.

- Owl

Kathy
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 153

12 posted 2006-02-25 07:49 PM

Oh my!

I do love this one.

Although, I must admit, much of it "over my head"

But I love it no less!!!
"when wolves howl to the sun;

I shall pass into some dimness
beneath old sol, but above la lune...
where fingers, fervent with fever,
only wish they could travel
one more time..".

Wonderful writing.

Hugs,
Kathy

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

13 posted 2006-05-07 06:55 PM

Wow, I LOVE how you write, I wish I wrote this - it's a keeper....I've read it 3 times and it is still as powerful each time.

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

14 posted 2006-05-08 05:40 AM

Oh wow. what a beautiful write!

Katerie
Member

since 2006-01-27

Posts 92
Central New York

15 posted 2006-05-08 06:12 AM

The use of foreign language is amazing here, and the entire poem is really eloquent and mysterious. Everything is well said, and much enjoyed.

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