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dawn wakes |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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dawn is that precision, in your hot liquid steam? “welcome back monotonous light”, i smile, while looking at the clear glass bowl of patent expression & rippling curtains of beautiful glows i was waiting for you to sprawl over rooftops & trees over creaking bones and aching limbs crossing a gulf of time and space radiating from within life sparks of a grinding wheel, orator of another day voice to your protégés, flowing essay unrelenting nature is considering her days assignment… there is no claim to right or wrong she is a task, non-human with quite an imagination the odor of morning is worth a fortune a mere tourist am i, visiting your safe place tracing your glittering mouth ranting open circles of some spanned explosion now, with the rise of your vibrant filled warmth all things that were lost, are a memory which draws up plans for today… i am your virtual slave… owning calculated incompetence… an intellectual world away are high halls of atmosphere your colored droplets spew me observations with noncommittal sounds, moving into powerful being you evoke life, evolve the hours you automatic wizardess of intensity subterranean breeze blowing billows of mass and mist into figurines that fill the atmosphere seeping through the cracks of my world amid the whisps of vapor & varied colored hues lift me, today…tomorrow, as you always do… |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyable prospective ms Lee J playful and grand with orange hands |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Well a lift is a lift as I always say. Good morning sweet.  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Happiness is being alive in a new day, a new dawn. As your “Dawn Wakes”, you are shining with brilliance in this write, like the early morning sunshine. Great write Lee J. JL  |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Beautiful description of morning. You fully captured the bright prospects of a new day. Great Writing! Shenachie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautifully penned Lee.. "amid the whisps of vapor & varied colored hues lift me, today…tomorrow, as you always do…" Lovely..perfectly lovely. Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lovely...breathes of new beginnings and hope whether 'she' arrives swathed in blankets of gray or glowing paint on blue and lavender pallettes. The "clear glass bowl of patent expressons..." Wings of morning...lift me, too! Beautifully penned. Loved this! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
there is no claim to right or wrong she is a task, non-human with quite an imagination ~*~ You caught her.  I love it.  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A brilliant expose of your writing talent and the wondrous visions that unfold as light creeps across your dawn Truly superb and enjoyable to read |
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