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Who Could |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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Who could see me the way he does… Who, as pushing my hair back with his big warm hands, Loves the look on my face As I feel every bit of him against me Beneath me Loving me… Who could love this heart of mine quite the way he does… Who, as pulling me closer, Tells me I am beautiful in spite of my self That no matter what this outer shell becomes It is more the heart of me that entices his soul For wanting more of me… Who could know me better than he… Who, as showing me my human flaws in such a gentle way, Explains to me why that little girl is who she is Why she does the things she does— She sees me— Who but he could tell me that… It is he, this man who saved me from myself This man I unwittingly found while giving up on finding him Who could be the one the way he is… Only he… dgvarner 021706 "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
This touches my heart. How I wish I could find the 'He' in my life.  |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Very beautifully written ! ::smiles:: Thank you for sharing this. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is more the heart of me that entices his soul For wanting more of me… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ There you have it!! We should all be so lucky! I'm really lovin' your poetry, but you knew that already! Hugs to you sweet one. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
g~ this is just beautiful, a very heartfelt write...I enjoyed! ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Oh my..you must know "who" enjoyed, Thanks and Hugs, Kathy |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*sigh* This is beautiful and then He created the horse... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
heart and soul where love is real and beauty is seen from within for love to be truly felt, it is given from within a soul a heart a spirit not many know real love as they dont feel only see and lust and satisfy a need. your truly blessed My spirit will rise |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
one of the loveliest poems, and the way it should be...  M |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
FNG..I wish for you to find your "he" too..It's such a wonderful find! URIAH..Thanks so much! BLUES..Yes, It's an awesome gift my husband gives to me everyday!! So glad you're enjoying my poetry--it's so seldom I get to play in the blue, to read and to share.... TRACIE..Thank you! KATHY..I DO know "who"! Glad you enjoyed! SKYFIRE..Thanks for the "*sigh*"....  It says so much!MGROVES..Thank you for such a beautiful reply! I am indeed truly blessed! M..Thanks a bunch! Thank you all for reading..It's so fun to be here when I can steal away from the daily routine and responsibilities (which basically means I've left my house in a shambles and the kids are calling "MAAAAA-MAAAAA......" LOL) Hugs, g |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Whoa.. this absolutely took my breath away. Such a poetic description of the way love should always be!! A keeper for sure. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now.... This is romanticism in all of its finest form.... and I am wowed.... and awed. Excellent work! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
RAINBOWDUST..So glad to have taken your breath away! COOL! SUNSHINE..Thank you so much!! So happy to have you reading me!  hugs, g |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Touching me softly...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
JAMESMICHAEL.. so glad you enjoyed...thanks for reading!! hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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