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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-02-18 10:27 AM



Illusioned Sweet

I pass the time of lonely days
Remembering each time we meet.
Always in the back of mind,
I hear the voice, illusioned sweet.

I press those words, dry the tears
So many ways lost to the fears...

But there you are, unknown at times
Supporting me with words in rhyme.

In distant hold, awaiting when
The silent breeze is ours again.

Touch-me-eyes that burn my soul
In shades of blue that harken dark.
Taste of lips that leave me quotes,
Pleasured thoughts to press their mark.

Sometimes those doubts, unanswered whys
Interfere with rainbows dreamed.
A snapshot here, a snapshot there
To split apart, what once was seemed.

Words, just words, some new, some old
Mindful grasping taking hold.

Romancing You, romancing me
To journey where we ought to be.

But time, it takes its toll on love
With images and thoughts thereof.

I pass the time of lonely days
Waiting for When Next We Meet
Reflecting on, to hear again
That voice in rhythm, illusioned sweet.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-02-18 10:43 AM



Maureen...

from the title down,
I was very pleased with this...




nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2006-02-18 11:05 AM


Thank you, Karilea..just writing some morning feelings down today~~~trying to keep warm


M

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3 posted 2006-02-18 02:17 PM


"Romancing You, romancing me
To journey where we ought to be."

The key words to this piece,
but you probably all ready know that.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2006-02-18 02:43 PM


Happy B Day Bernie
thanks for stopping by on this cold, cold day~~
hugs and smiles
M

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5 posted 2006-02-18 04:49 PM


you warmed me up too out here in cold NJ
with your sweet and forlorn song of love gone amiss

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-02-19 03:23 PM




You certainly have beautifully poignant morning feelings M. I love this.

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