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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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green of a beach village, tiny garden, fountain playing, we sit alone, afternoon breeze finding its way from wind chime to flower, we do not speak a confusion of bougainvillea wanders red rampant over wall |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A great snapshot of life here..a still from your life montage..thank you lady.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you GR. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Umm... Wow. This is such a beautiful poem. Educational too. I've never come across this format before. I like it. Thanks for sharing.  Andrew |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
sucha beautiful piece of work |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Well done Lady, enjoyed. Cheers - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Andrew, poetryqueen and Ed. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
I am not usally a big fan of Haibuns but this is quite good.. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Page! |
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