human attachment to the spiritual

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Open Poetry #37

human attachment to the spiritual

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2006-02-16 07:43 AM

and i go to a flower’s desire
gathering ambition slurs
some orthodox creation
tapes a frame to my mind
like cave paintings & shamanism
direct path of insight

we’ve met before
espousing
themes symbolic
within the
dribbling hiss of
echoing souls

mere finger puppets
of nostalgia
where stimulus
simulated our
imaged destiny
our matrix

tedious hours
my love,
tedious hours

perceptive, embryonic visions
flamboyant colors of elements
stared deep into porous orange
hearts of some powerful certainty
freewill cocktails
painting moon silhouetted
perpetual motion where sky meets
ocean…
where generations reverberate
fossilized droplets of articulation

there
we are gin soaked in honesty
the sunrise of gentle distinction
engrained in a mystic ritual
delicate drug tides cleanly littered
across waves of lost emotions
forever tracing a journey through
midnight oceans…
poetic impetuous independence
seeping into our composing minds
dream fed glorious ambitions
of some ambient ballet
only you and I know
harvest this drifting mystery
where you are
thicken the atmosphere
with a suppose of yours

***

Footnote:
wrote while listening to Andrea Bocelli?

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (02-16-2006 11:21 AM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2006-02-16 08:13 AM

now..andrea..he is that guy that plays for the raiders right? (grin) I enjoy your pen ms!!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2006-02-16 08:25 AM

LeeJ
It does seem like that doesn't it.
Good morning sweet.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2006-02-16 11:08 AM

“painting moon silhouetted
perpetual motion where sky meets
ocean…
where generations reverberate
fossilized droplets of articulation”

A real beauty here,Lee J, words of inspiration for the reader.

JL

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-02-16 05:24 PM

"tedious hours
my love,
tedious hours"

Feels like pure honesty here LeeJ. I enjoyed it!

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