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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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broken hearts in the cold crisp of winter why do i set myself up for a fall my fate has been like a roller coaster my stomach no longer hungry, now lost with out the sunshine in my heart strange how everything works in this life the world turns no matter what it, will never end as it would have already stopped in the night ... stars are no help anymore where once was magic is now a whisper of her what causes my demise .... I ask the question well knowing the answer peace once by my side now fades to a depression far away ... into my own world i will hide again a fool with his one rose, and how he thought he could make his wishes come true only to find that lonesome heart still beating it goes deep as my soul seems to turn away on myself ...a division bell in the distance as the hope of a blizzard enters my mind dreaming it to be covered in a blanket of white ... and the moon to shine its light a reflection of the sun , just a mirrors image thats all, yet enough for light shadows to cast from the tree's and in the back corner is a hidden wolf laying down alone in the snow .... sending out a howl so lonley it hurts to let it out into the chilly air around him .... a lost dreamer with a white coat and cute ears and paws ... resting his eyes and passing into sleep ... so calm and almost invisable to all .. .. all but the ones who know where, he hides away his lost beauty till the moon sets and the sunshine rises once again JDW III 1-12-2006 " the only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams " - tupac shakur |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"yet enough for light shadows to cast from the tree's and in the back corner is a hidden wolf laying down alone in the snow .... sending out a howl so lonley it hurts to let it out into the chilly air around him .... " Oh, this is sad  -- but the imagery is amazing.  ...jo |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
I really felt and pitcured this poem...Nice work... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
sad yes it is , just where i am at thanks for the kind reply iliana willow , ahh weeping in the winds of a time gone by . ... years ago fade into today ..is time what we asked for or was it created in the imagination of all , into the ice caves of the north is where my heart rests frozen and blue with love lost my hopes bright and good is my truth in myself but deflated in a seconds notice what i knew was to happen thanks for reading and happy you could relate even as sad as it seems ... it helps thanks new pipster , this place is filled with hearts of gold and love that goes on for miles ... peace and passion ~Wolfie |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wolfie~ this is so deeply felt as the reader. i felt the pain in your heart, the lonliness and solitude in your soul and the torment in your mind....sad, lonely write, deeply felt and pictured...thanks for sharing your heart and soul here at PiP. winged ~hugs~  floating your wayTracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Brother Wolf "into my own world i will hide again a fool with his one rose, and how he thought he could make his wishes come true only to find that lonesome heart still beating it goes deep as my soul seems to turn away on myself ...a division bell in the distance as the hope of a blizzard enters my mind..." Excellent poetry... Many parts of this poem recall a time when I heard Jack Londons voice speaking to me through a wolf spirit...."the wild is lonesome",it said, and "it calls best when we are lonely"...It again speaks to me in this poem. ________ ___ice ><> |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Tracie thanks so much for the winged hugs  i needed them ...i am happy to share with you Brother Ice thanks for telling me that story , what an awesome tale, and i agree with Jack L. he was a great writer , thanks again and peace be with thee ~brother wolf |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"as the hope of a blizzard enters my mind dreaming it to be covered in a blanket of white ... and the moon to shine its light a reflection of the sun , just a mirrors image thats all," listening to the cries of wounded heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write wolfie...much enjoyed. Sending hugs your way, Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
big smiles thanks i needed the hugs ~J |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
These lines say it all, James: as my soul seems to turn away on myself ...a division bell in the distance You know you are stronger than that. But I can empathize, very much so. |
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