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Open Poetry #37

I love you

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2006-02-14 06:28 PM

I love you

Ok I admit I am crazy
But I will never deny I loved you
I promise some day I will tell you
If it is the last thing I do

OK I amit I am confusing
But the only thing in my soul
Is the heart that I stole
And is why I'm here begging for parole

Ok I admit I am a picky person
But if I weren’t, you wouldn't be here
And for every moment with out you dear
Is something I truly fear

Ok I admit I was hard on you
I never thought I could love someone
As much as I loved you hun
If only I could turn back what was done.

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-
* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

[This message has been edited by Juju (02-14-2006 11:37 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-02-14 07:21 PM

~sigh~ give this to him

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

2 posted 2006-02-14 11:02 PM

You have a typo in the second stanza, I think.

I'm touched by the content of the poem. We often don't reveal how we really feel under the surface, do we?

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-02-14 11:09 PM

I'm with Midnitesun. Give it to him...

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2006-02-17 02:42 AM

Thank you, but he is in another part of the world and I think he is there for a reason. It may be better if I don't.

-Juju

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-
* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

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