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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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well nuts I didn’t think it would be like this the pathos you gave me once described my kitchen walls in varied shades of green some of the leaves are yellow now some brown I think it’s too late for water at dawn I lie huddled under a new blanket soft warm shades of blue a confused sky I have changed the sheets to pale blue the sheets with flowers wanted me to be content I wonder what kind of stones Aunt Emma put in her pockets when she walked into the water were they plain ugly granite and slag or polished white rounds of quartz shot through with pink delicate and worthy of her conveyance you remember the stones in Aunt Emma’s pockets don’t you? am I what? no no I was just considering the stones in Aunt Emma’s pockets |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I have a hard time remembering my own…. Now I forgot what I was going to say… Aunt Who?? This is another good one. I think I like the blues more, but you are on a roll. Enjoyed JL  |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
the pathos you gave me once described my kitchen walls in varied shades of green some of the leaves are yellow now some brown I think it’s too late for water This is excellent!! You never cease to amaze me |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I have changed the sheets to pale blue the sheets with flowers wanted me to be content" enjoyed this and though it is sad, it left me grinning in understanding |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you all. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You'd better not be! Great write, Lady, and so very original.  ....jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
at dawn I lie huddled under a new blanket soft warm shades of blue a confused sky I have changed the sheets to pale blue the sheets with flowers wanted me to be content marvelously written and felt can't wait until your next post... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you iliana and LeeJ. |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Do not follow Aunt Emma's example...besides, unless you use really large stones, they will not weigh enough and you couldn't carry enough of them. On the other hand, if you use really large ones, then you can't carry enough of them at one time to do any good. So it's really all kind of useless...best to think on it a while. (Smile) Love your writing...so thoughtful and thought provoking. |
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