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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-02-13 05:56 PM

Precious God Above

When you lose
your loved
ones smile,
the whole world
seems different
for awhile.

Whats this world
I'm living in...
why must life
come to an end?

My precious God above
no one likes to lose
the one they love.

JamesLee
February13
2006

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-02-13 07:28 PM

OhJamesMichael~
Too sad a message the day before Valentine's Day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2006-02-13 10:03 PM

Hard sentiment for the heart, but too precious is living, and when it passes with time or any other means it is an emotion we all must deal with. But rejoice for the spirit to someday be reunited. Hope.

God Bless

JL

Air Goddess
Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 108
Canada

3 posted 2006-02-13 10:24 PM

You have painted
your pain in this poem.
May the bright colors draw the
eyes of others so that they will
know that they are not the only
ones that have seen the face of
Death.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2006-02-13 10:28 PM

Nothing is ever really lost, James....only changed, I believe this one. Feeling your pain.....jo

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-02-13 11:00 PM

Very moving James.

wvatvrider
Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 78
West Virginia,USA

6 posted 2006-02-14 07:53 PM

loss is indeed part of life-a very hard part-becoming easier as time goes by-a moving poem

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

7 posted 2006-04-27 10:59 PM

Beautifully written poem
Sad yet soft and heart warming

Debo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2006-04-28 04:27 AM

very touching James

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

9 posted 2006-04-28 05:54 AM

No one likes to lose the one they love
yet in God, their heart can always be true
but what of love, for it was charity.
This pure love of Jesus Christ

a poet who cares

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

10 posted 2006-04-28 02:46 PM

ah, this I think He does know, for no death and no more crying is one of the first promises made about Heaven......sigh....nother sigh

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